Rough Cut Audience Feedback

WWW:
The narrative goes with the theme of the song showing the artiste with his friends when they are younger having fun and visiting a castle, as that is the main thing mention in the song within the choruses. Also, the lip syncing shots are timed well with the actual song to look as if the actor is actually singing the song himself.

EBI:
The music video could do with having some more performance in it as at the moment it is almost all narrative with only a couple of shots with lip syncing, which most conventional music videos wouldn't have. Also, the shots were too long for a music video, they need to be shortened with more cuts to go with the fast pace and move the video along a bit more so it doesn't get boring to watch.